My Research Paper

So my research paper in about facebook and myspace. In my proposal, I said I would be addressing questions such as: Why did this phenomenon take off and become such a hit? How are these sites affecting advertisers and their campaign strategies? What are the dangers in these kinds of blogs as opposed to “regular” or “real” blogs on Web sites, for instance, Blogger.com?

and I also said I would focus a lot of the paper on advertsing effects from myspace.


The feedback I got was that it was a good paper topic, but there are too many questions being addressed and I need to organize it around one central claim instead.

I want to talk about all of these questions I wrote down, how do I tie to them all in? My thesis could be something like "Myspace and Facebook sites have changed/affected they way the world and people work" something to that affect, and then I could give my examples from above.


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